Narrow the scope of your project to get your dissertation proposal approved

Scope is the definition of the edges of our study. We could study the whole world. Hey, why stop there? We could study the entire universe! That would be a broad scope for a social scientist. I don’t recommend biting off that much topic. In fact, I suggest narrowing the scope of your project—a lot.

Scope is what you have after you’ve set your delimitations. What are delimitations? Hey, thanks for asking. Delimitations are restrictions we purposely implement to reduce the breadth and width our study. For example, we might delimit our study to one local geographical area or to one subset of a population.

Here’s my story. When I set about studying academic quality in for-profit vocational programs, I planned to talk to students, faculty, administrators, and employers. After some iterations (and replacements of committee members), I settled on a phenomenological approach to exploring academic quality through the perspectives of these four groups. How cool, I thought!

“Not so fast,” said my new Chair. “Do you realize what a monumental data analysis task you are creating for yourself?”

“I can do it,” I stubbornly replied.

I was enthusiastic until I started writing up my research plan in my dissertation proposal. As I forged through my plan, I began to see what I nightmare I was in for if I had four groups to compare. I was running out of time in my program. How on earth would I be able to synthesize the results of qualitative interviews from four groups of stakeholders in less than six months?

When I hesitantly suggested we cut out employers, my Chair said, Why not just study faculty? As long as you can explain why they alone are being studied, one group is sufficient for a doctoral project. Hallelujah. I made the decision to cut back to just one group, faculty. It was the moment when things began to fall into place.

I narrowed the scope even further. I could have interviewed faculty who taught at private nonprofit and public institutions, in addition to faculty who taught at for-profit institutions. That would have been a different study. I delimited my study to only for-profit faculty. I could have tried to find faculty in different cities. I didn’t have the resources to do that, so I delimited my study to only one metropolitan region. I could have done a mixed-methods survey to expose the definitions of academic quality generated by my small qualitative sample to a larger quantitative sample. That project was too big for me, and more to the point, not necessary, so I delimited my study to one qualitative approach with one small sample of faculty.

If you think about it, in the sense I just described, our problem and research questions are delimitations, and those delimitations define the scope of our study. We identify the boundaries we’ve placed on our research in terms of who we are studying (our sample) and how we are studying them (our methodology and method). Your reviewers will likely ask you to justify your delimitations. Why did you choose that place, those people, rather than other places and other people?

Too broad a scope is a problem I often see in the papers I edit. I get it. It’s tempting to want to get your arms around all facets of a problem. It’s like we feel obligated to throw in the kitchen sink to earn the doctorate. You may want to challenge yourself, take the road less traveled, yada yada. That’s great, and we applaud you, you trail blazer, you. But just so you know: It’s not necessary to earn the degree. Your narrow, well-defined study will be more likely to receive approval than a vast panoramic study of the entire Chinese supply chain, or the U.S. public school system, or whatever.

Reviewers don’t always catch a poorly defined scope. Here’s an example. Let’s say you want to study the experiences of Oregon high school students who failed the high school exit exam. Perhaps your own experience with racial discrimination prompted your interest in the topic. You plan to describe the test failure experiences of students of color, disabled students, and English language learners (ELLs). However, in your literature review, you focus primarily on the group with whom you most strongly identify: the students of color and barely mention the disabled and ELL students. Then, in the last few paragraphs, you add another group to your plan: low socioeconomic status students, without remembering to mention them in your problem, purpose, and research questions. It’s so easy to fall prey to scope creep!

That’s why I recommend, when you describe the problem for a doctoral dissertation, keep the focus and scope tight and narrow. Later you can study other groups. If you didn’t limit the scope in your proposal, and somehow that got by your reviewers, you can still attempt to manage the scope when you write your manuscript by defining your terms and describing your study’s limitations with strict clarity.

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What it’s like to be a nontraditional learner at an online for-profit university

When I was struggling to get my dissertation proposal approved, I looked for assistance on the virtual self-help shelves (in LinkedIn groups and online forums) and wistfully read the suggestions of various experts on choosing Committee members, meeting with advisers, commiserating with peers … I didn’t know what to make of their advice. None of that was my experience.

I “attended” an online for-profit university. I wasn’t given the option of choosing my Committee or my Chairperson. These mysterious people were assigned by even more mysterious administrators. Chairs and Committee members came and went: I usually had no idea my Chair had been replaced until I received a message from a new Chair introducing herself and asking to see my most recent proposal.

I earned my Ph.D. from a regionally accredited, fully online for-profit university. That means my doctoral experience occurred at the intersection of online learning and for-profit higher education. If you are a “traditional” graduate student—that is, if you attend a public institution (like Your State University) or a nonprofit private institution (like Harvard or Yale), you may disparage my experience and question the validity of my degree. I don’t blame you; I definitely had a different kind of education experience, compared to the one you know.

On the other hand, if you attend University of Phoenix, Walden University, Capella University, DeVry University, Strayer University, Grand Canyon University, Northcentral University, or Ashford University, you may find that you and I have a lot in common. Many of these for-profit institutions offer their programs at least partially through distance (online) learning. Some offer 100% online programs, meaning they have no residency requirements. They don’t even have any classrooms.

So, what about these for-profit universities? The mistrust of the for-profits is not just something floating in the zeitgeist: The differences between “traditional” and “nontraditional” higher education are dramatic. Nontraditional students are different from traditional students in some important ways. Similarly, nontraditional (online for-profit) institutions differ from their traditional counterparts, in ways both beneficial and frightening.

The main thing to keep in mind is that for-profit universities are businesses designed to generate a profit for their shareholders or owners. The way they generate that profit is through delivering education. Education is their product, not their mission and purpose. (In the interest of full disclosure, I should tell you now that my dissertation project was about academic quality at for-profit vocational colleges. Hey, what can I say. I was a cranky instructor with a bone to pick.)

The good news is that many for-profit higher education institutions—especially the ones that offer doctorates—don’t offer the types of vocational programs that the federal government is keen on regulating; thus, many of the concerns that led to these federal regulations may not apply to your for-profit institution. However, for-profit graduate universities are considered pretty low on the academic food chain, loved by few and disparaged by many.

The nontraditional graduate experience is not the same as the traditional face-to-face graduate experience. So far, I haven’t seen a book that addresses the plight of the dissertator who attends an online program or a for-profit university (or both, as I did).

I wrote Resubmit! 28 ½ Reasons Why You Can’t Get Your Dissertation Proposal Approved specifically for nontraditional doctoral learners who attend online programs in the social science fields (business, education, psychology, etc.) at for-profit institutions.

Are you a nontraditional learner? Let’s find out.

  • You pay your own way (cash or credit)
  • You experienced bad educational experiences in the past
  • You work full-time
  • You care for others
  • You have little time to spare for education
  • Online education is your only option
  • You need support from faculty and others
  • You feel a sense of urgency
  • You feel a sense of “succeed or die”
  • You feel a sense of fear

Nontraditional education options tend to attract nontraditional people. If you attend a for-profit institution, think about why you chose to enroll there instead of at your local state university or private nonprofit university. I’m guessing it was a combination of factors, like it was for me: cost, schedule, and online access.

For-profit bookcoverinstitutions keep churning out graduates, and like it or not, we are all ambassadors for the industry. I can only hope that in time, the stellar work we do—or at least the solid, trustworthy work that we do—will bear testimony to the quality of the education we received. I’m doing my part, I hope.

If you need some help getting your proposal approved, my new book might help.

 

 

 

The most common dissertation proposal problems

Here are the most common proposal problems I see repeatedly as I am editing people’s proposals and dissertations. These problems are most likely to motivate reviewers to reject your dissertation proposal. If you address these before you submit your paper, you are more likely to receive a happy outcome.

Lack of alignment

By far, the most common problem I see in proposals and dissertations is a lack of alignment between the problem, purpose, research questions, and methodology/methods. Alignment means all these elements logically flow from one to the next. This is such an important requirement that I devote an entire chapter to it in my book (see REASON 14).

Inconsistent terminology

From the variety of ways people write about the core elements of their project (the core elements I’m referring to are the problem, purpose, research questions, and methodology/methods), I get the feeling that we dissertators have a fear of being boring. However, this isn’t creative writing, and you are not an entertainer. Maybe you like to think you are the life of the party, but the purpose of your project is not to entertain your audience. I talk more about this problem in REASON 24.

Too many quotations

Uncertain researchers rely too heavily on other re-searchers’ words. Paraphrasing is an art you can master, and it’s worth practicing. A dissertation or proposal that is half quotes gives the impression the dissertator lacks critical thinking skills. Giant blocks of quoted text is a dead giveaway you don’t know what you are doing. Inordinate amounts of quoted material are red flags for reviewers. I address this problem in REASON 24.

Not enough citations

I hope you are familiar with the word plagiarism. Odds are, if you don’t cite your sources properly, you will soon learn what that word means—the hard way. Plagiarism is the unattributed use of someone else’s words, thoughts, ideas, and concepts. Whatever you borrowed, if you don’t say clearly who you borrowed it from and provide a usable reference back to the original source, you run the risk of being accused of plagiarism, which can get you expelled from your program. Yep. Expelled. Kind of a big deal. I talk more about this problem in REASON 22 and REASON 27.

Lack of compliance with a style guide

Did you know on top of everything else you have to contend with, you must comply with a specific set of style guidelines? Every field uses some sort of style guide. Medical dissertators will likely use AMA guidelines. If you are in the social sciences, you most likely will use the APA style manual. Style guides may seem arbitrary, but you need to find out which one your institution, department, or program uses, buy the manual, and study it. Find more on APA style guidelines in REASON 25.

Noncompliance with template

A few lucky dissertators attend programs at institutions where in terms of format, it’s the Wild West. Just about anything goes. Odds are very good you don’t go to one of those schools. Sorry. That means you must comply with some kind of structure and format. Getting Word to help and not hinder you in this task can make you want to tear out your remaining hair. Never fear. Help is in REASON 26.

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